You remind me of the pollen.
You camouflage with
the petals of a sunflower.
Each one of your lines
under a magnifying lens make
me wanna
be a person like you
Bryan, sixth grade, Dobie Middle School
Badgerblog
Voices of the Week: Poems and Stories from Young Writers
March 12th, 2009 at 9:33 am
Fantastic poem–fantastic writer! I’m so impressed with Bryan’s ability to capture an image and say something new about it.
September 29th, 2009 at 9:31 am
NICE POEM BRYAN…
September 29th, 2009 at 9:31 am
I like you poem it’s pretty cool it reminds me of spring and my birthday.
September 29th, 2009 at 9:32 am
I like your poem It reminds me of spring
September 29th, 2009 at 9:34 am
awesome poem dude , great creativity